Next to me

Just experimenting a new style. Opinions do matter 🙂

Next to me she lay.
Her eyes were a blurry,
She spoke to me slowly…
Like she had nothing to say.

On the grass her head rested,
And she gazed at the stars.
She hid from me her scars,
The smile was sugar-coated.

She was playing with the chain she wore,
She didn’t really know she was.
Laughter was a very large dose,
And she was afraid of anything more.

The girl besides her pulled at her ear.
She shook the  hand off her shoulder.
Something she snickered and told her…
Something I never got to hear.

She allowed the grass to tickle her toes
As she brushed away her shoes.
She was tired, this wasn’t news…
Her life was full of woes.

Next to me she lay…
She fell into a sleep,
A place she didn’t weep
A place she had things to say.

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11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Zeeshan
    Apr 13, 2013 @ 17:25:46

    I guess we are both experimenting now 🙂 Do you like writing on clouds?

    Reply

  2. melon03
    Apr 14, 2013 @ 16:41:59

    This style is pretty good!!!

    Reply

  3. melon03
    Apr 15, 2013 @ 02:54:19

    Yup it is!!!!!! 😉

    Reply

  4. Sajith
    May 06, 2013 @ 06:05:39

    Poetry! It’s REALLY good! You should definitely keep this up:)

    Reply

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